Your fragile skin, so easily torn
Crumpled, wrinkled, rubbed and worn
Down by life – leaves you forlorn
You’re paper-thin
You have no armour on your soul
So simple to open a vein and bleed
Into the page – those words you need
Exsanguinated, finally freed
You’re paper-thin
You have no armour on your soul
Your smile so quickly turns to tears
Your hopes and dreams collide with fears
Off-balance in your maelstrom years
You’re paper-thin
You have no armour on your soul
Yet storms will also turn to light
Your sunshine future burning bright
Spirit warrior – fly and fight
You’re paper-thin
You have no armour on your soul
This piece was inspired by the article ‘The Paper-Thin People‘, by Rachel E. Blesdoe, who blogs at Misfits of a Mountain Mama, and who writes most beautifully.
beautiful
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Thank you BW ❤
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Am so happy to see these words in a proper post. Every word demands more room than a comment section. Thank you with all my heart. I don’t think I’ve inspired any poetry in 15 years.
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Bless your boots. I’m so glad you liked it! *grinning* Well, now you’ve most definitely inspired poetry. And not too shabby, either (well, I would say that, but STILL!) 🙂
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Omg this is amazing # totally get this
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Thanks 🙂 I’m glad I captured it 🙂
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Fragile and beautiful.
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Thanks Val. Rachel’s post was incredible and it evoked an enormously strong response from me, quite out of the blue.
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Life is really fragile. Great thoughts.
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Thanks Linda. Life can be appallingly fragile sometimes.
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I feel this one, too.
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I know you do. *hugs*
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While the poem is just lovely, its the style I love even more… What is it about a poem with those repeating lines just driving it home… awesome use of the style stuff… whatever the hell its called. I am catching up tonight. I finally figured out how to just stay zoe here and my other persona there… ironically (being one of said Bards) I read it all but dont get to show much here… UNTIL NOW!!!! BWAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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OH FUCK! IT DIDNT WORK! OH WELL… Im still here… DAMMIT…. grumble… I am hating me some wordpress lately!
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You have too many ‘you’s and WP can’t keep up…
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YOu insinuating something, punk!? You think Im too guarded or something? You calling me nuts? huh… you wanna piece o dis?… heheheheeeee. ( you know Im kidding right?… zoe told me to say that….)
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I could take you :p
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Now you could. But~…. when I was your age you young hippie whipper snapper!
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I don’t fight fair. I could take young you…
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I’ve discovered a style I really, REALLY like, and I have no idea if it has a name (it doubtless does), but I don’t really care, because it just seems to work for me 🙂
Also (as you saw) no, ya didn’t.
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