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Winged
Years spent
struggling to ready myself
for a resolution
that never came.
Silent prayer-
Grant me the serenity
to believe
there are no answers.
to believe
there are no answers.
First flight is imminent
unprepared, vulnerable,
Pushed from the nest
grasping at branches while I flap my wings.
Memories of your touch,
your scent,
the stories and parables into the night,
crying in the others embrace-
Somehow you stayed.
Today
for an instant
I couldn’t remember your face.
Im not ready
This is an entry into Two Shoes Tuesday… The prompt was “Ready.”
All very beautiful, until the sudden heart-stopping panic at the end.
Very evocatively done, my friend.
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He looks a bit young to have attempted his first flight. I bet his siblings pushed him out. Let's hope he launched over water and can find his way back. Your ending turning it to a human emotion was most poignant.
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Really pretty. I love the photo too. Is it yours? Can't wait to read more poetry by The Well Tempered Bards. 🙂
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Thanks Lizzi… It was hard to write this one… Im glad you “felt” the panic…that's kinda what I wanted at the end.
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Thank you , sir! Every difficult moment feels like that first flight. I think youre right that little guy looked as unprepared as I felt.
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actually Mary I did this at my desk before work and in a rush I meant to go back with the photo credit…nope not mine…
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I will look forward to seeing you back here… thanks for the read!
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It bloody worked…
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🙂 that's what it felt like when that happened…
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A change of mind – that's what I see.
Happy Two Shoes Tuesday from the Philippines! ;o)
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Z, this is my favorite poem of yours so far. Particularly from /Somehow you stayed/ through the final line. Beautiful work. Karen
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Il love this poem, Zoe. I think that we never quite feel ready to let go and trust in life, to just fly into the wind and see where it carries us. Sometimes we have to make that leap of faith, but it is so scary. We have to learn to trust ourselves more… and to have faith that it will all be ok.
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I tried to comment yesterday, but had computer connection issues.
I really felt this poem. Beautifully written, it is so very genuine and relatable.
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Fly birdie, fly! : )
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So much emotional punch here. Strong, powerful, vivid and wonderful. Winsome dread,
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