Promise

Take me now
And lay me down
In the place where you and I know

Find me there
In present time
Seeking, as your eyes glow

Gently feel
My trembling soul
Underneath your tender hand

Take your time
No urgency
Can shatter aught that we’ve planned

Fingertips
Trail over skin
To seek humanity therein

Without words
I know you heard
Every nuance I’ve been playing

Finding joy
And peace together
In those firstfruits of surrender

Drinking deep
From eyes to heart
I want all your Forever

By Lizzi

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8 comments on “Promise

  1. zoe says:

    Just beautiful. ..really lovely…

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  2. psychochef says:

    Lizzie, I really enjoyed the lyrical nature of this poem. Lovely.

    Karen

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  3. Considerer says:

    Thanks Karen 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. Lovely take on the promises of love, Lizzi. Sharing this.

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  5. Considerer says:

    Think I overran into idealism, but thanks 🙂

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  6. zoe says:

    idealism often reflects hope which is not a bad place to be…

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